Thursday, 11 September 2014

The House

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The old paint looked like crunched newspaper peeling off. grass grew on top of the roof getting longer and longer. Big, black, mean rats surrounded the house. bleached weatherboards. Broken glass laid in the grass and cracks became to appear to along the sides of the house. Rats and birds made the roof their home and the noise sounded like they were fighting. The grass the the broken green glass. Then inside grass grew from out of the floor and the spouting hang from the ceiling. Ripped wallpaper looked like crushed newspaper. There was really rotten floor you could barely stand on it). The dripping leak went drip drip drip. broken bits of wood and glass covered the ground . People had long given up on it and Electricity was non-existent there and everything was broken. Suddenly i heard birds and rats and possums fighting but it sounded like they were playing rugby .

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